很久没在百度上回答问题啦，今天偶尔看到你的留言，还在截止日期之前，算你走运，也算不辜负你的信任吧，呵呵~
看了一下你写的东西，请允许我说说个人看法哦。可能是你没来得及整理，文章看起来有点乱。面试的话，我觉得以下说明顺序会比较好吧。
（简单自我介绍）
专业是旅游英语，主要学的是关于旅行社方面的。
明年6月份我正式毕业，然后今年12月7号开始我就可以全职工作了。
（说明目的，以及应聘此职位的动机）
我这次是来应聘（职位）的实习生，当然了，是希望可以转正留在这里发展的。因为我觉得在这里工作可以让我接触不同的人，而且我喜欢帮助人，如果将来有机会和客人面对面交流，我想我都会很开心。（从公司的利益角度出发，你的在职能为公司带来什么？不要仅仅说自己能得到什么）
（应聘此职位所具有的资格）
性格上，我脾气比较好，别人都说我有亲和力，而且做事细心周到。
英语水平的话，简单的日常交流没有问题。
电脑方面，办公软件的操作都比较熟练。
在经验上我的确是非常不够，但是我善于观察，会自己总结，找规律，理解能力和学习能力强。（举例证明你的资格）之前考计算机一级，当时我们是没有相关课程的，要自己从网上找资料学，否则很难通过。比如FLASH制作，当时我明显比其他人更快了解其中的规律，能够触类旁通，班级还自己组织了考前临时补习班，我有参与教学的部分。
我家有经营淘宝店，是4钻的，如果我回家，就帮忙管店铺，因为有些事情需要电脑的操作和英文，这样事情做起来方便，也快。主要经营的是（产品），货源是从亲戚那里来的。
因为卖（产品），有时候会有香港人来咨询，讲英文的。我指的是网上聊天工具。（可以放在前面用此例说明你的英语和电脑水平。）
另外我还想说，如果经过面试你们觉得我目前不适合这个职位，其他职位我也很乐意，我愿意从低做起，也知道有些工作是很辛苦的，虽然没有社会经验，但是我相信我吃的起苦，我希望、也觉得自己适合从事服务业。所以希望你们可以给我一个机会。
如果我有幸被录用，这个将是我的第一份工作，我会花200%的努力去用心做的。
工资方面，根据个人情况和市场标准，比较合理就可以了。我更想要的是将来能够根据我的能力给我工作机会和发展。
由于我的课程主要是围绕旅行社方面，对酒店不了解，想问一下这里有没有相关的培训？如果我被录用了，将来能不能参加？
不过我也不知道你这些话是不是都要用的，所以，翻译我还是按你的顺序翻了，反正我也只是调整了一下顺序，到时候你用什么话自己挑吧，记得适当地加些连词就好了。
专业是旅游英语，主要学的是关于旅行社方面的。明年6月份我正式毕业，然后今年12月7号开始我就可以全职工作了。性格上，我脾气比较好，别人都说我有亲和力，而且做事细心周到。英语水平的话，简单的日常交流没有问题。电脑方面，办公软件的操作都比较熟练。在经验上我的确是非常不够，但是我善于观察，会自己总结，找规律，理解能力和学习能力强，如果我有幸被录用，会尽快吸收外界来的知识，不仅仅是理论上的。我这次是来应聘（职位）的实习生，当然了，是希望可以转正留在这里发展的。因为我觉得在这里工作可以让我接触不同的人，而且我喜欢帮助人，如果将来有机会和客人面对面交流，我想我都会很开心。我目前的英语水平还不是特别好，不过为了提升自己也为了工作的需要，我会继续努力提高英语水平。另外我还想说，如果经过面试你们觉得我目前不适合这个职位，其他职位我也很乐意，我愿意从低做起，也知道有些工作是很辛苦的，虽然没有社会经验，但是我相信我吃的起苦，我希望、也觉得自己适合从事服务业。所以希望你们可以给我一个机会。
My major is tourism English, focusing on the relevant knowledge of tourism agency. I will graduate on June next year, but I can work in full time from December 7th this year. I am good-tempered and amiable in communicating with other people, and careful and considerable when handling affairs. My English is good enough to exchange with others in daily life. I am skillful in computer operations such as exercising official software. Truly, I do not gain much experience in this area, but I am a good observer. Besides, I am capable in summarizing and discovering laws and have excellent ability of comprehension and learning. If I were employed, I would absorb relevant knowledge as quickly as possible, not only theoretically. Here I am applying for the trainee of the (position name). Certainly(如果是外企的话，少用of course, of course语气太重，类似于“那当然了！”，好像别人不知道一样的), I hope to become a regular staff here. Because I think I can contact with different people to work here and I like to help the other people very much. I would be very happy if I had chances to communicate with customers face to face(或者to serve our customers face to face. 自己考虑一下语境)。I will continue to improve my English for this position.（别说my English is poor, 要表达自己英语不好，英语说得比较委婉，不过我一下想不起来怎么说了，呵呵） In addition, if you think this position is not suitable for me, I am willing to accept the other ones as I am ready to start from a primary level, even I know it may be hard. Without much experience, still, I believe that I am capable to overcome various difficulties. I hope I can get a job in service industry and I think I am suitable for it too. So, I sincerely hope that you can offer me a chance.
看到一个人因为得到了我的帮助解决问题，他的笑会让我很开心，所以我认为我是适合服务业的。
It makes me happy if one smiles because my assistance has helped to solve his/her problem. This is the reason why I think I am suitable to work in service industry.
由于我的课程主要是围绕旅行社方面，对酒店不了解，想问一下这里有没有相关的培训？如果我被录用了，将来能不能参加？
As my curriculum is mainly centering on the aspect of tourism agency, I am not so well informed about the hotel operation. So I want to know whether there is any relevant training? If I were employed, would I have the access to attend it?
我家有经营淘宝店，是4钻的，如果我回家，就帮忙管店铺，因为有些事情需要电脑的操作和英文，这样事情做起来方便，也快。主要经营的是（产品），货源是从亲戚那里来的。
因为卖（产品），有时候会有香港人来咨询，讲英文的。我指的是网上聊天工具。
My family is running a Taobao shop on line, with credit grade achieving four diamonds. When I was at home, I would help operate it, serving customers on line, in English if necessary. Doing business on line through computer is fast and convenient. The main products of the shop are (product name), supplied by my relatives. Sometimes I would respond to Hong Kong people consultating the products in English.
如果我有幸被录用，这个将是我的第一份工作，我会花200%的努力去用心做的。
If I were employed, I would make every effort to devote myself to my first job.
工资方面，根据个人情况和市场标准，比较合理就可以了。我更想要的是将来能够根据我的能力给我工作机会和发展。
As to salary, I hope it would be reasonable according to my personal condition and market standard. I pay more attention to the job opportunities and development you could offer me in the future on the basis of my ability.
之前考计算机一级，当时我们是没有相关课程的，要自己从网上找资料学，否则很难通过。比如FLASH制作，当时我明显比其他人更快了解其中的规律，能够触类旁通，班级还自己组织了考前临时补习班，我有参与教学的部分。
When our classmates and I made preparation for National Computer Rank Examination Grade One, there was no relevant curriculum. We had to search materials on line and to study on our own, or it would be hard for us to pass. However, for example, when we started to learn flash manufacture, it was obvious that I learned faster the laws of it than other people, and I could comprehend by analogy. Furthermore, I took part in teaching in the contemporary cram class organized by the class before the exam.
时间比较紧，我没检查了。错误肯定也在所难免，麻烦你自己检查了，呵呵，祝顺利！

我的名字叫XX，今年23岁，我毕业于上海商学院商务秘书专业。

My name is XX. I'm 23 years old. I graduated from Shanghai business school majoring in business secretary.

性格活泼开朗，外向。有两年的工作经验，具备良好的沟通与协调能力，喜欢并擅长销售。

Lively and outgoing personality. Two years of working experience, good communication and coordination skills, like and good at sales.

此外，我有扎实的文字功底，写作能力强。我平常的兴趣是看书，听歌，跳舞等。

In addition, I have solid writing skills and strong writing ability. My usual interests are reading, listening to music, dancing and so on.

当然我也有很多的不足，但是我一直在努力的充实和完善自己。

Of course, I also have many shortcomings, but I have been trying to enrich and improve myself.

我希望加入你们，能与你们一起工作，我会尽我的能力，为公司创造最大的价值。

I hope to join you and work with you. I will try my best to create the maximum value for the company.

谢谢。

thank you.

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Hello！My name is。。。My major is English, the main tourist learn is about travel agency. In June of next year I officially graduated, then this year December 7th started I can working full-time. The character, my temper is better, the other people all say I have affinity, and working carefully and thoughtful. English words, simple daily communication: no problem. Computers, office software operations are skilled. In experience I was indeed very enough, but I observant, will sum up find rule, understanding ability and learning capability, if I am lucky enough to be employed, will soon absorb the knowledge, not only theoretically. This time I came about (position) the intern, of course, is the hope of the development of well stay here. Because I feel work here can let me touch different people, and I like to help people in the future, when opportunity and guest face-to-face communication, I think I would be very happy. Now my English is not very good, but in order to elevate himself also to the needs of work, I will continue to work to improve my English. In addition, I also want to say, if after the interview you feel that my current is not suitable for this position, I will be very glad to other position, I am willing to from low to start with, also know some work is very hard, and although no social experience, but I believe I eat up bitter, I hope, also feel suitable for services. So I hope you can give me a chance.
See a person because you got my help solve the problem, he smiles makes me very happy, so I think I was suitable for services.
Because of my course mainly around the travel service aspect, to the hotel does not understand, want to ask if there are related training? If I was accepted and future can attend?
My home have business taobao shop, is four drill, if I go home, they help tube shops, because some things need to be in computer operation and English, such things convenient, also fast. Main business is (products) and source from relatives there.
Because sell (products), sometimes people in Hong Kong to consultation, speak English. I refer to the online chatting tools.
If I am lucky enough to be employed, this will be my first job, I'll spend 200% effort to carefully done.
Terms of wages, according to individual circumstance and the market standard, more reasonable. I want nothing more than is the future can according to my abilities give me work opportunity and development.
Before exams computer level, when we are not related courses, want oneself to learn from the Internet to find material, it is hard to pass. For example, when I made to FLASH significantly faster than others know among them rule, and could one, class return oneself organized pre-exam temporary cram school, I have to participate in the teaching part.

Major is English, the main tourist learn is about travel agency. In June of next year I officially graduated, then this year December 7th started I can working full-time. The character, my temper is better, the other people all say I have affinity, and working carefully and thoughtful. English words, simple daily communication: no problem. Computers, office software operations are skilled. In experience I was indeed very enough, but I observant, will sum up find rule, understanding ability and learning capability, if I am lucky enough to be employed, will soon absorb the knowledge, not only theoretically. This time I came about (position) the intern, of course, is the hope of the development of well stay here. Because I feel work here can let me touch different people, and I like to help people in the future, when opportunity and guest face-to-face communication, I think I would be very happy. Now my English is not very good, but in order to elevate himself also to the needs of work, I will continue to work to improve my English. In addition, I also want to say, if after the interview you feel that my current is not suitable for this position, I will be very glad to other position, I am willing to from low to start with, also know some work is very hard, and although no social experience, but I believe I eat up bitter, I hope, also feel suitable for services. So I hope you can give me a chance.
See a person because you got my help solve the problem, he smiles makes me very happy, so I think I was suitable for services.
Because of my course mainly around the travel service aspect, to the hotel does not understand, want to ask if there are related training? If I was accepted and future can attend?
My home have business taobao shop, is four drill, if I go home, they help tube shops, because some things need to be in computer operation and English, such things convenient, also fast. Main business is (products) and source from relatives there.
Because sell (products), sometimes people in Hong Kong to consultation, speak English. I refer to the online chatting tools.
If I am lucky enough to be employed, this will be my first job, I'll spend 200% effort to carefully done.
Terms of wages, according to individual circumstance and the market standard, more reasonable. I want nothing more than is the future can according to my abilities give me work opportunity and development.
Before exams computer level, when we are not related courses, want oneself to learn from the Internet to find material, it is hard to pass. For example, when I made to FLASH significantly faster than others know among them rule, and could one, class return oneself organized pre-exam temporary cram school, I have to participate in the teaching part.

你的问题这么长，看着都有点累~